I think I've found a flaw in Eva's design and my love of dark backgrounds....
Aaanny way I'm entirely too lazy/tired to try to type an awesome description here... (It's 1:30 am and I'm not sure if I've EVER written an awesome description before so I guess that's two strikes in a row... or something.) But I guess I'll give it a shot.
Behold the main conflict of a dominant leech of my creativity as of late. A Darkwing Duck fanfic set ten years after the show left off with Honker Muddlefoot as the main character, bet you didn't see that one coming. Unless of course you're one of my readers then yeah... you knew that already didn't you? So anyway... Agent Muddlefoot of SHUSH has quite a dilemma on his hands which involves the safety of not only himself but a Ms. Gosalyn Mallard (or as the crime circuit knows her Quiverwing Quack)... but it soon turns around where the best ally he has to safeguard his girlfriend is... another girl. Love triangles anyone? Yes I'll take one to go with fries.
...wow I'm super stupid right now so I'll shut up.
DWD and all related stuff is (c) Disney
*update*
Took the suggestions of *megs83 who called me on my lazy Honker coloration among other lazy things. ;-; Hopefully it looks better now.
Boy you are up late!! It's 2:00 in the morning as I am typing this!! Honker really looks great and awesome as an adult!! And I love how Gosalyn looks!! So beautiful with that red hair!!
Who would have thought the little geek would turn into a superspy superstud? I really like how you did older Gos - er, older Quiverwing Quack
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JD: Dr.Cox..
Dr.Cox: Newbie, if the next two words out of your mouth aren't 'See ya', then the third word will be 'Oh my god. My crotch. You've punched me in my crotch.'.
Keen gear!! And actually I think you worked with Eva's "flaw" quite nicely. It makes her all the more mysterious and accents those gorgeous eyes of hers! She's an intriguing character and I can't wait to read more!
My only observation is that compared to the girls in the BG, Honker is looking a little simple and lacking in texture, which kind of makes him a focal point of the piece but at the same time throws off some of the balance. I know the poor guy doesn't have a whole lot of hair to texturize but may be you could tweak his suit just a bit? Just a something to experiment with nothing major. Can you tell I'm taking a Color and Design class? Yes, you may flog my for my annoyance! One last thing and then you can warm up your flogging arm. You might want to consider a border to give the viewer's eyes some boundaries so they don't wander off the composition. The diagonal lines in the far BG gives natural motion for the eye from left to right and are a nice design concept but there's nothing to stop that motion from sweeping you right off the page. And with all the work and coolness of this piece, it deserves to be stared at for more than a few seconds.
Overall, you totally kick tailfeather! But, you already knew that.
thats amazing i't wicked i must fav this the impluse is to intence to resist
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"Kind of makes me feel like Riverdancing." ~Agent Smecker
"Never shall innocent blood be shed, yet the blood of the wicked shall flow like a river."
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I am Darkwing Duck in The Disney Directory's Disney Character Claimers'
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Screwy, but smart.
Gos' eyes look amazing, really!
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Guaranteed to jack you up.
If you were going to take over the world, would you blow up the White House 'Independence Day' style, or sneak in through the back door?
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JD: Dr.Cox..
Dr.Cox: Newbie, if the next two words out of your mouth aren't 'See ya', then the third word will be 'Oh my god. My crotch. You've punched me in my crotch.'.
JD: See Ya!
- Scrubs.
My only observation is that compared to the girls in the BG, Honker is looking a little simple and lacking in texture, which kind of makes him a focal point of the piece but at the same time throws off some of the balance. I know the poor guy doesn't have a whole lot of hair to texturize but may be you could tweak his suit just a bit? Just a something to experiment with nothing major. Can you tell I'm taking a Color and Design class?
Overall, you totally kick tailfeather! But, you already knew that.
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Don't judge yourself on what you can't do but frm rather what you can do.
Fear isn't weak and hate isn't bad. Nore is madness bold. The eye miss leads far more then your heart.
does Honker look sexy...
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